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Seniors ~ Revisions

The last stage of your research project begins on FRIDAY, October 17th. Your first task is to combine all three drafts into one cohesive document:
  1. First, open the "career" file and add the second and third papers to the bottom (insert file OR copy & paste)
  2. Next, remove MLA headings from papers two and three
  3. Make sure the pages are numbered in sequence -- if not, then remove and replace
  4. Combine all "works cited" into one list, arranged alphabetically (remove redundant citations)
  5. Revise the MLA heading on the first page, and add underlined section headings to each section of the paper (i.e. Introduction, Career, Problem, Solution)
  6. Finally, correct any errors that you notice (typos, spelling, punctuation, etc.)
Print out the copy and turn it on on FRIDAY. This is the copy I will annotate. After I've added some comments, you will all revise your drafts and create an annotated bibliography for the sources used in your research.

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